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I haven't been following Omniverse as closely as the other series in the franchise. But, having watched the 2 episodes featuring Kai, it's become clear to me that Dan Riba (who directed both episodes) and David McDermott (who wrote both episodes) need to step up their game.

Since when are the writers in such a hurry to make Ben and Kai into a couple? Everyone in the London episode thought they were dating and now Spanner comes along and says they're "destined to be together."
Speaking of which, if Spanner’s a time traveler, and he knew the robbery was going to happen, why didn’t he warn them?
Why did he make Kai wait 10 years to find the orb again instead of just giving it back to her?
What exactly were those 2 guys planning to do with the orb?
Why put in an arbitrary cliffhanger at the end when Gwen could easily help track the orb?

I'd say I'm looking forward to Kai being in another episode, but at this point, that would be unfair to Bettina Bush (her voice actress).
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I dreamed of you last night.

You had just graduated from high school in a gown of your school colors and that square cap with the string on it.

I went afterwards to an ice cream parlor, where all the other graduates crowded together and drowned their celebrations in a mass sugar rush.

You met me there in a funny white "Grad" hat as I was getting my Death By Chocolate.

I hurried to greet you, almost forgetting a spoon.

We then drove to your house where I forget what happened - but let's keep it clean, shall we?

I woke up the next morning, back in my own bed.

Your presence had stuck to me and I thought:

Boy, did you have a nice

hat
What was that thing Mr. Anderson used to say?

"Too old to rock and roll, too young to die"?

That's how I am at the moment.

I'm too old to pretend that I'm too young to care.

I'm too old to be the same stubborn, teenage rebel that I once was.

And yet, at the same time, I'm too young to be through with it all.

It's an odd feeling, like the feeling of whatever's in this drinking glass.

I wonder as I look at it, resting in my hand, if this is what it feels like to be human.

Now, I guess, I'm supposed to pick a side: is the glass half-full or half-empty?

Frankly, I don't give a damn.

All that matters is that the glass has something in it.
A Nobel Achievement? by Gdan95
A Nobel Achievement?
The recipients of the 2014 Nobel Peace Prize were recently announced.
They are Kailash Satyarthi, an Indian children's rights activist, and Malala Yousafzai, the Pakistani girl who got shot by the Taliban for advocating women's access to education.
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I haven't been following Omniverse as closely as the other series in the franchise. But, having watched the 2 episodes featuring Kai, it's become clear to me that Dan Riba (who directed both episodes) and David McDermott (who wrote both episodes) need to step up their game.

Since when are the writers in such a hurry to make Ben and Kai into a couple? Everyone in the London episode thought they were dating and now Spanner comes along and says they're "destined to be together."
Speaking of which, if Spanner’s a time traveler, and he knew the robbery was going to happen, why didn’t he warn them?
Why did he make Kai wait 10 years to find the orb again instead of just giving it back to her?
What exactly were those 2 guys planning to do with the orb?
Why put in an arbitrary cliffhanger at the end when Gwen could easily help track the orb?

I'd say I'm looking forward to Kai being in another episode, but at this point, that would be unfair to Bettina Bush (her voice actress).
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Migi47 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
Thanks for the watch :)
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No problem.
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Happy birthday :D
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Thank you!
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